The page is losing investor enquiries before anyone reaches the form. The hero leads with the business name instead of an offer, the strongest proof point - a 20%+ return - is buried in 10pt text, and there is no visible founder, team, or track record. For a regulated-adjacent investor audience, the page reads as low-trust and generic.
Three changes will move the conversion rate more than any cosmetic redesign:
- Rewrite the hero to lead with the 20%+ return and the audience (hands-off investors).
- Add a face and a track record - founder photo, deals completed, capital deployed, years operating.
- Strip the "Click here" button and replace every CTA with specific, outcome-led copy.